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twilight and the cookie jar by Coltsteelstallion twilight and the cookie jar by Coltsteelstallion
created with the inkpad app for ipad.
mlp,fim (c) Lauren Faust and Hasbro.
art by me.

twilight isnt my favorite pony but she sure is the cutest one.

first time filly Twilight and the sparkle family (ecept for shining armor). got some trouble with the backrground, but i think it turned out alright.

:iconcoltsteelstallion: have a nice day
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You never cease to amaze me with what you can do with a tablet app.

There are a couple of things that I will point out that could've been done differently or omitted.

Be careful with gradients, the show rarely makes use of them, usually for clouds, hills, ground, and the sky. Objects tend to have a solid shadow. Examples in the comic include the math poster and the pillar on the left (for the math poster, you could add either a parchment paper with a geometric shape(s) that is colored like paper or in hue with the wall, plus exclude the text because the show is detailed, but not too detailed).

The word "Cookies" on the jar could be of a different font that isn't so sharp, or be replaces with just squiggles. Same goes for the "Pleaaase", bright red is hard to look at comfortably.

Speaking of Panel 3, the background could have a potentially comedic effect if the background were replaced with a sparkly, bubbly scene like those seen in anime (here's such an example). Your call though.

Round the sharp edges at the bottom of the cookie jar.

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Vision: Classic parental pushover scenario. Kind of rare in this day and time, and so bravo for making one.

Originality: I've seen my fair share of "Hnnnng"-induced-by-cuteness comics, this is slightly similar but nonetheless in the same effect. Cuteness is used for benefit though in this case as opposed to just stringing out "DAWWW's".

Technique: Did I mentioned how amazed I was in the first sentence of this critique? No? Well then; I'm amazed.

Impact: This is a very classic comic with a dose of pony (too much if you're prone to heart-attacks from cuteness).

Lovely comic and again a great comic from an unusual tool.
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This comic is funny when Twilight said "Pleaaase" . And it's so cute. I would give her anything i just can't resist that face. Even i can't even say no to that face. I hope you do more comics. I just love love love them! It makes me read over and over!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :) :) :) . And i wonder what was the first thing she made that face. I love the face when twilight mom is looking at him shes like really really with that face. :D :D :D :D :D:D. I hope you do more that they are comedy! good luck!
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SapphireLibra3 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
Best.  Father.  Ever. -.-
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E-guardias Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
aww, how cute, but i would never let her eat one of my cookies, I'd sooner get shot by a narcotic than share one single crumb!
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psychopathneb Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Student Artist
atlest she ant a gamer and dint steal my x-box
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darkangle213 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Artist
I had a heart attack of cuteness 
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PrincipalCelestia Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
panel 3 oh god
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XxdarkChaosMLG2xX Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Filmographer
Cover your eyes......
In CSS translation.....

GET OUT OF THERE ITS GONNA BLOW!!!!!
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E-guardias Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
Oh no she's doing the face. You can't say no to the face.
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EcliptorCalrissian Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
Weaponized cuteness!
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morion87 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
The one thing no parent or bronie can resist:  THE SAD FILLY TWILIGHT FACE.  Works every time.  She propably did this all the time before she got into the school.
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Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Flash Fire: If you think Twilight's puppy eyes are bad you should have seen Celestia and Luna's. Uh they got away with murder, and it's all because I could not take the star oh. Uh it tough being a father.  
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