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twilight and the cookie jar by Coltsteelstallion twilight and the cookie jar by Coltsteelstallion
created with the inkpad app for ipad.
mlp,fim (c) Lauren Faust and Hasbro.
art by me.

twilight isnt my favorite pony but she sure is the cutest one.

first time filly Twilight and the sparkle family (ecept for shining armor). got some trouble with the backrground, but i think it turned out alright.

:iconcoltsteelstallion: have a nice day
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You never cease to amaze me with what you can do with a tablet app.

There are a couple of things that I will point out that could've been done differently or omitted.

Be careful with gradients, the show rarely makes use of them, usually for clouds, hills, ground, and the sky. Objects tend to have a solid shadow. Examples in the comic include the math poster and the pillar on the left (for the math poster, you could add either a parchment paper with a geometric shape(s) that is colored like paper or in hue with the wall, plus exclude the text because the show is detailed, but not too detailed).

The word "Cookies" on the jar could be of a different font that isn't so sharp, or be replaces with just squiggles. Same goes for the "Pleaaase", bright red is hard to look at comfortably.

Speaking of Panel 3, the background could have a potentially comedic effect if the background were replaced with a sparkly, bubbly scene like those seen in anime (here's such an example). Your call though.

Round the sharp edges at the bottom of the cookie jar.

Explanations

Vision: Classic parental pushover scenario. Kind of rare in this day and time, and so bravo for making one.

Originality: I've seen my fair share of "Hnnnng"-induced-by-cuteness comics, this is slightly similar but nonetheless in the same effect. Cuteness is used for benefit though in this case as opposed to just stringing out "DAWWW's".

Technique: Did I mentioned how amazed I was in the first sentence of this critique? No? Well then; I'm amazed.

Impact: This is a very classic comic with a dose of pony (too much if you're prone to heart-attacks from cuteness).

Lovely comic and again a great comic from an unusual tool.
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This comic is funny when Twilight said "Pleaaase" . And it's so cute. I would give her anything i just can't resist that face. Even i can't even say no to that face. I hope you do more comics. I just love love love them! It makes me read over and over!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :) :) :) . And i wonder what was the first thing she made that face. I love the face when twilight mom is looking at him shes like really really with that face. :D :D :D :D :D:D. I hope you do more that they are comedy! good luck!
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:iconpiccolagiuggiola:
piccolagiuggiola Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
PLEAAASE *Free Icon/Emote* Nutella Pusheen (OMG) 
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:iconmysteriousgummy:
Mysteriousgummy Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Twilight: pweasssseeeeeee
Nazi: OH GOD, I SURRENDER! TAKE THE GUN! TAKE MY MONEY! TAKE THE ILLUMINATI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconknightpony12:
knightpony12 Featured By Owner May 20, 2015
Victini Nom Plz 
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:icongumcake:
gumcake Featured By Owner May 19, 2015
cuuuuuuute
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:iconaurastrike110:
AuraStrike110 Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Deze al paar keer gelezen. Mijn oude account is banned zonder redenen :(
Ik hoop da je het nie erg is als ik een paar bases uit je comics maak?
Zoals deze: fav.me/d8tuukm
Moet ik je credit geven? Ik heb je er wel al bij gezet als eigenaar ;) 
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:iconchocolatninja:
ChocolatNinja Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
You cannot resist the face.
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:iconwhyita:
Whyita Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay Twilight! My fave pony/unicorn/alicorn ^^

COOKIES FOR EVERYPONY!
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:iconcorperalking:
corperalking Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015
HHNNNNGGGG!!!
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:iconninnin618:
NinNin618 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Hobbyist
HAHAHAHA i cant stop laughing by the last panel,,just..TAKE THEM TAKE THEM ALL,,
HAHAHAHAHAHA:rofl 
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:iconrainbowgamermc:
RainbowGamerMC Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Shining armor: Dad Why do you always give into Twilight?

Night Light: Shut up son you are grounded

XD
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:iconsnowflake20006:
snowflake20006 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015
thats me and mah parents :D
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:iconglitch10:
Glitch10 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015
well he didn't give in. She asked for ONE not all of them!
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:iconaskponyphilippines:
AskPonyPhilippines Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh Night Light, you have so much to learn.... poor stallion.
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:icon79089:
79089 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I WISH THAT WAS MY DAD!
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:iconfluttershylover20:
fluttershylover20 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
So funny and cute.
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:iconstar-dragon22:
Star-Dragon22 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
Oh god....those eyes.>_<; *puts on a blindfold* Ah...thats better.
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:icondoubleblaze:
DoubleBlaze Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015
there is one in youtube now :D

youtu.be/a_3BGAqbTQM
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:iconcoltsteelstallion:
Coltsteelstallion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
Oh cool...
thnx for sharing ^_^
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:iconkniznik:
kniznik Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
Dat face.  No male is immune
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:icondoubleblaze:
DoubleBlaze Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
we surrender our soul to Clapping Pony Icon - Complete Stallion Six Clap 

RIGHTtttttt.. guyyyy Twilight Sparkle HI, GIRLS. animated icon 
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:icongodzilladragon111:
godzilladragon111 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
is what happens if ANY of the mane 6 asked me for something.
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:iconthegodsquadalphateam:
TheGodSquadAlphaTeam Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Funny how Mother is stronger than Father, hahahahaha! Come on Night Light, you can do it! A firm "NO." Bunny Emoji-89 (Cheer) [V5] GO GO NIGHT LIGHT C'MON MAN---err... stallion---YOU CAN DO IT
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NoOneCares3244 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Night Light: *looks firmly* N-N
Twilight: Pleeeeeease???
Night Light: YES YES!!!!! I GIVE IN TO YOUR POWER!!
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:iconthegodsquadalphateam:
TheGodSquadAlphaTeam Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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:iconnoonecares3244:
NoOneCares3244 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tank you!
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:iconthegodsquadalphateam:
TheGodSquadAlphaTeam Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconkraven1994:
KrAvEn1994 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
Oh no the forbidden face of absolute adorableness!
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:iconsoldierboyxiii:
SoldierBoyXIII Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
Curses! Foiled by cuteness again!
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:iconknightpony12:
knightpony12 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014
trolled father Lol 
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:icondraxeid:
Draxeid Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014
Sooooo Cute :D
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:iconponylover115:
ponylover115 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Student Artist
what the fuge man Blink {REQUEST} 
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:iconfujin777:
Fujin777 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Twilight Velvet: Weakling.......
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:iconmysterios-artist:
Mysterios-Artist Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
what is the name of twilight father and mother?
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:iconcoltsteelstallion:
Coltsteelstallion Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
Mother- Twilight velvet.
 father-Night light.

these are the cannon names for twilights parents.
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:iconbluefoxycat:
bluefoxycat Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now all this needs is a male having a nosebleed. I blame twilight and the funny anime crap I watch.
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:iconkwendynew:
kwendynew Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight uses THE STARE. It's super effective.
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:iconphantomnova189:
PhantomNova189 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
No one can resist the pony face
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:iconsapphirelibra3:
SapphireLibra3 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Professional Writer
Best.  Father.  Ever. -.-
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:icone-guardias:
E-guardias Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww, how cute, but i would never let her eat one of my cookies, I'd sooner get shot by a narcotic than share one single crumb!
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:iconpsychopathneb:
psychopathneb Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Student Artist
atlest she ant a gamer and dint steal my x-box
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:icondarkangle213:
darkangle213 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Artist
I had a heart attack of cuteness 
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:iconprincipalcelestia:
PrincipalCelestia Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
panel 3 oh god
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:iconxxdarkchaosmlg2xx:
XxdarkChaosMLG2xX Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Cover your eyes......
In CSS translation.....

GET OUT OF THERE ITS GONNA BLOW!!!!!
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:icone-guardias:
E-guardias Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh no she's doing the face. You can't say no to the face.
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:iconecliptorcalrissian:
EcliptorCalrissian Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
Weaponized cuteness!
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:iconmorion87:
morion87 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
The one thing no parent or bronie can resist:  THE SAD FILLY TWILIGHT FACE.  Works every time.  She propably did this all the time before she got into the school.
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Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Flash Fire: If you think Twilight's puppy eyes are bad you should have seen Celestia and Luna's. Uh they got away with murder, and it's all because I could not take the star oh. Uh it tough being a father.  
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nathanl9 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Dawn Heart: at least you don't have to deal with my sister Dawn Light... when she does that face.... well she convinced me to let her get a black hole which she then used on all the males that kept bothering her.... also she managed to one time convince me to allow her to test a spell on me which led to me becoming female for a couple of days.... worst days of my life -_-
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Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Flash Fire(Prime): Hmm. She sounds like she would get along great with my alternate time reality self Flash Fire Gama. Though like me he is a kind soul, he tends to be a bit of a trouble maker who I must admit gets away with murder when he teams up with Rainbow Dash.   
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nathanl9 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
Dawn Heart: ?!?!?! murder?! how doe he manage to get away with that?!?!?
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