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come fly with me. by Coltsteelstallion come fly with me. by Coltsteelstallion
created with the inkpad app for ipad.
mlp fim (c) Lauren Faust and hasbro
art by me.

we all know how tough rainbow dash is, but she also has a sweet side, like this comic shows.

:iconcoltsteelstallion: have a nice day
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:iconxgaruandpuccax:
I it is very nice that rainbow dash decide to help scootalo and i almost cry because this time dash didn't want to be all show off and i really love this art so keep up the good work!!! :D :D :D <3 <3 <3 oh and this won't let me put send so im doing a drwaing a picture of pokemon so guess what pokemon im drawing i will be wating for your answer :) :) :p :p :p :p gj gjg jg ed ed ed ed ws ws rf yg h oh and the wordsthat i typed o was bored.
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The plot is fairly unique, but I've seen the same style of drawing ponies in so many other places. A unique art style will bring the comic out among others, even if it takes adding shading here and there. Another thing to note is, well, they're just standing there. There isn't a lot of emotion going on, so as a result, I really don't get much emotion (or 'feels') from reading this, because you bought out the final scene too quickly. The switch between emotions was too quick, so honestly, there was no 'sudden impact' in terms of critique.

Next time you produce a comic which focuses on a sad, tense, or plot-twist kinda moment, I would recommend try bringing the moment out, like adding a few more frames til the final conclusion. Or perhaps, make the speech look discrete, so it looks 'mysterious', and even if that doesn't work, add more speech, meaning the reader would have to channel throughbthat before they reach the end. When you think of sad, what do you link in with it? Depression? Darkness? A look of sorrow? Clouded teary eyes?
Make the comic feel (or look) realistic. That way, readers can link the morbidness of reality wiith fictional characters. They can feel the trauma the character(s) went through.

Conclusion: The layout is good and orderly, but it is lacking in originality and impact. Try improving in these areas, whatever it takes.
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Supernova297 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
This is very cute, and I love it...but all I can think of as a continuation is...capt-nemo.deviantart.com/art/I…

I'm sorry I did that, guys.
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Supernova297 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
I just looked at that, so it was the first thing that, unfortunately, popped into my mind.
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:iconpinkiethepowerpuff:
PinkieThePowerpuff Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  New Deviant Student Artist
Aawww... SO cute. I can see this happening. :)
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:iconbengray1997:
BenGray1997 Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww, they're downright cute. :)
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:iconoctavia108:
octavia108 Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  New Deviant
SO CUTEFluffle Puff: *Pet pet* Pinkie Pie Free icon Lion running icon F2U Bonnie icon 
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:iconcherryrainbow49:
CherryRainbow49 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dawwwww
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:iconiamdibandmothman:
IAmDibAndMothman Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Student Artist
awwww
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:iconnovemberlilly:
NovemberLilly Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015
I think... I'm going to cry!Waaaah! but in a good way^_^
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:iconjigokutsuriana:
JigokuTsuriana Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaand, I'm tearing up. That's friggin' adorable.

I don't know why, but Rainbow Dash saying "Oh my...!" in any context really makes me laugh.
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:iconsnowflake20006:
snowflake20006 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015
cute!
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:iconresidentsmile:
residentsmile Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015
I believe I can fly..I believe I can touch the sky.
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:iconrainbowgamermc:
RainbowGamerMC Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Student Digital Artist
XD
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:iconemsquad:
Emsquad Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
Please make your comics bigger?, I cant read them
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:iconponys321:
ponys321 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Danisnotonfire: FEELS 
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:iconwhodatninja9386020:
whodatninja9386020 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
Get a plane.its conveinent.
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:iconmarcysparks:
MarcySparks Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
She wasnt my sister shes evil
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:iconmarcysparks:
MarcySparks Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Im feeling like,Im feeling like she will be princess cadence!
and scootaloo will be twily the filly!
your making this story to get a new generation! Scootaloo is teling the story about RD and her


OH IM SO EXCITED!!! NEXT I DONT KNOW WEEEEEDDDDDJHGGMJJHJISJDHSYHJING!
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Binxybeanygirl Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Awww....this makes me happy. 😊😂
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cupcakes82504 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015
Awwww!! OMG ONOZ Emoticon 
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:icondarknessmohag:
darknessMohag Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
all this cute scenes from mlp will be my death one day
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:iconkone5497:
Kone5497 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this makes me wanna cry :)
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:iconrasinycon:
Rasinycon Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
Love forever with Rainbow Dash :)
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:iconcorperalking:
corperalking Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
Dáww!
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:iconcandywatterson:
CandyWatterson Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwwwwwwwwww
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:iconlillygeneva:
LillyGeneva Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Daww.... STAHP MAKIN MEH WANNA CRY!happy cry XD 
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:iconhumming-way:
Humming-way Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
do you mind if I translate your comics in korean? :)
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:iconsora200:
Sora200 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Stop tugging at my heart! You'll tear it out! Oh God, the feels!!! :'(
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:iconwanjem:
Wanjem Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
This is so cute!
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:icongarfielddrawedonly:
GarfieldDrawedonly Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Me:OMG ONOZ Emoticon 
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:iconemilyceecee:
emilyceecee Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is SOOO cute,and at first in S1&2 I thought she was a big jerk
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:iconl-master:
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
great! :D
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:iconsonic-rainboom-4ever:
Sonic-Rainboom-4ever Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, um, this-this is liquid pride, ya hear?! *sniffle*
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:iconshineyluna:
ShineyLuna Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
hoo i crying Really Sad    I-I cant take it the feels :sad: 
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:iconweasleywoman:
WeasleyWoman Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
All I can think of is "I'm flying, Jack!" :P
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:iconchaudstarpower:
ChaudStarpower Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
awwwwwwwwwwww this brings tears to my eyes :') so adorable!!
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:icongummywolf123:
gummywolf123 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is so cute! Clapping Pony Icon - Scootaloo 
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:iconvash755:
vash755 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
:iconfeelplz: MA FEELS!!!!MAN MA FEELS!
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:icondarkgoldenspearhead:
DarkGoldenSpearHead Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
That's so sweet!
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:iconskytailskitty:
skytailskitty Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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:iconantivenom907:
antivenom907 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwwwwwww. I love this
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:iconcelestial-rainstorm:
Celestial-Rainstorm Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oooh, this was perfect! And yes, Sinatra's gorgeous voice filled my head the whole time.
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:iconcake4fluttershy:
Cake4Fluttershy Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
Me too I want to fly :(
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:iconscootfan213:
scootfan213 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student Artist
:')
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:icontp-night:
TP-Night Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aaw :3
made me shed a drop of liquid pride of happiness *sniff*
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:iconhihi2462:
hihi2462 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Writer
Awwwwwww that is the cutest thing ever
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:iconxxsuperpegasusterx:
xxSuperPegasusterx Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You know that really hit me man..
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:iconbluetaffy:
BlueTaffy Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel like this was your worst comment because rainbowdash did not talk like herself, she sounded more like twilight. 
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:icondarkcaninepinkielove:
You idiot. In Sleepless in Ponyville, she took Scootaloo under her wing. Now, you'd think she'd be more like this. And before Sleepless, this wouldn't fit, you're right, but it sounds like Fluttershy to say this stuff. 
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BlueTaffy Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I said the way she TALKED not the way she acted.

"you idiot".


lol. 
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:icondarkcaninepinkielove:
Sorry, I have my moods and I act stupid like that.
Screw moods. 
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