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come fly with me. by Coltsteelstallion come fly with me. by Coltsteelstallion
created with the inkpad app for ipad.
mlp fim (c) Lauren Faust and hasbro
art by me.

we all know how tough rainbow dash is, but she also has a sweet side, like this comic shows.

:iconcoltsteelstallion: have a nice day
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I it is very nice that rainbow dash decide to help scootalo and i almost cry because this time dash didn't want to be all show off and i really love this art so keep up the good work!!! :D :D :D <3 <3 <3 oh and this won't let me put send so im doing a drwaing a picture of pokemon so guess what pokemon im drawing i will be wating for your answer :) :) :p :p :p :p gj gjg jg ed ed ed ed ws ws rf yg h oh and the wordsthat i typed o was bored.
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The plot is fairly unique, but I've seen the same style of drawing ponies in so many other places. A unique art style will bring the comic out among others, even if it takes adding shading here and there. Another thing to note is, well, they're just standing there. There isn't a lot of emotion going on, so as a result, I really don't get much emotion (or 'feels') from reading this, because you bought out the final scene too quickly. The switch between emotions was too quick, so honestly, there was no 'sudden impact' in terms of critique.

Next time you produce a comic which focuses on a sad, tense, or plot-twist kinda moment, I would recommend try bringing the moment out, like adding a few more frames til the final conclusion. Or perhaps, make the speech look discrete, so it looks 'mysterious', and even if that doesn't work, add more speech, meaning the reader would have to channel throughbthat before they reach the end. When you think of sad, what do you link in with it? Depression? Darkness? A look of sorrow? Clouded teary eyes?
Make the comic feel (or look) realistic. That way, readers can link the morbidness of reality wiith fictional characters. They can feel the trauma the character(s) went through.

Conclusion: The layout is good and orderly, but it is lacking in originality and impact. Try improving in these areas, whatever it takes.
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LillyGeneva Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Daww.... STAHP MAKIN MEH WANNA CRY!happy cry XD 
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Humming-way Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  New member
do you mind if I translate your comics in korean? :)
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Sora200 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Stop tugging at my heart! You'll tear it out! Oh God, the feels!!! :'(
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Wanjem Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
This is so cute!
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GarfieldDrawedonly Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Me:OMG ONOZ Emoticon 
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emilyceecee Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is SOOO cute,and at first in S1&2 I thought she was a big jerk
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L-MASTER Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
great! :D
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Sonic-Rainboom-4ever Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, um, this-this is liquid pride, ya hear?! *sniffle*
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ShineyLuna Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
hoo i crying Really Sad    I-I cant take it the feels :sad: 
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WeasleyWoman Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
All I can think of is "I'm flying, Jack!" :P
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