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come fly with me. by Coltsteelstallion come fly with me. by Coltsteelstallion
created with the inkpad app for ipad.
mlp fim (c) Lauren Faust and hasbro
art by me.

we all know how tough rainbow dash is, but she also has a sweet side, like this comic shows.

:iconcoltsteelstallion: have a nice day
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:iconxgaruandpuccax:
Critique by xgaruandpuccax xgaruandpuccax/critique/678487476">Sep 7, 2012, 2:59:20 PM
I it is very nice that rainbow dash decide to help scootalo and i almost cry because this time dash didn't want to be all show off and i really love this art so keep up the good work!!! :D :D :D <3 <3 <3 oh and this won't let me put send so im doing a drwaing a picture of pokemon so guess what pokemon im drawing i will be wating for your answer :) :) :p :p :p :p gj gjg jg ed ed ed ed ws ws rf yg h oh and the wordsthat i typed o was bored.
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Critique by Sketchl Sketchl/critique/678650559">Sep 8, 2012, 2:24:07 AM
The plot is fairly unique, but I've seen the same style of drawing ponies in so many other places. A unique art style will bring the comic out among others, even if it takes adding shading here and there. Another thing to note is, well, they're just standing there. There isn't a lot of emotion going on, so as a result, I really don't get much emotion (or 'feels') from reading this, because you bought out the final scene too quickly. The switch between emotions was too quick, so honestly, there was no 'sudden impact' in terms of critique.

Next time you produce a comic which focuses on a sad, tense, or plot-twist kinda moment, I would recommend try bringing the moment out, like adding a few more frames til the final conclusion. Or perhaps, make the speech look discrete, so it looks 'mysterious', and even if that doesn't work, add more speech, meaning the reader would have to channel throughbthat before they reach the end. When you think of sad, what do you link in with it? Depression? Darkness? A look of sorrow? Clouded teary eyes?
Make the comic feel (or look) realistic. That way, readers can link the morbidness of reality wiith fictional characters. They can feel the trauma the character(s) went through.

Conclusion: The layout is good and orderly, but it is lacking in originality and impact. Try improving in these areas, whatever it takes.
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modelcargallery98 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2017  Student Photographer
Awwwwwww
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:iconponyfun323:
ponyfun323 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2016
cute i love mlp XD
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:iconzsocreed:
zsocreed Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I see Titanic in this
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:iconrasenganlucario:
RasenganLucario Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016
And this is why Rainbow Dash is my favorite Pony.
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:iconsandrastar1:
Sandrastar1 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016
awww. rainbowdash is a good sister for scootaloo
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:iconbokunzhao:
BokunZhao Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2016
They are true sisters, definitely are. All those fan arts, comics even TV shows, proves it. Maybe not physical, but emotional.
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:iconskylanders456:
skylanders456 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2016  Student Digital Artist
awwwwwwwwwwwwww
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:iconwhereismycookieo-o:
WhereIsMyCookieo-o Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Student Artist
Am I the only person here who is feeling Titanic atmosphere ? :(

Mkay
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XKawaiiWorldX Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i cri evrtm i sii diss shet 

traduction:
i crie everytime i see this shit
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:iconmericcupisbestship:
MericcupIsBestShip Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2016
Aww! The feels man! The chicken who flew
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:iconswirly-draws:
Swirly-Draws Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2016  Student General Artist
DO NOT READ AHEAD PEOPLE WHO HAVE NOT SEEN CRUSADERS OF THE LOST MARK









Ok the Crusaders got their cutie marks and Sweetie Belle now knows how to do magic but Cmom Hasbro make Scootaloo fly
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:iconrobotponytron:
Robotponytron Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Student
Buzzzzzzzzzzz lol
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:iconfoxydivaartist:
FoxyDivaArtist Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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:iconkittyart32:
kittyart32 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
aw so cute
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:iconh0rnycorn:
H0rnycorn Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015  Professional Filmographer
:')
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:iconmaddiebird12:
maddiebird12 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWWWW :3
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:iconsupernova297:
Supernova297 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
This is very cute, and I love it...but all I can think of as a continuation is...capt-nemo.deviantart.com/art/I…

I'm sorry I did that, guys.
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:iconbokunzhao:
BokunZhao Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2016
I got the same thing in my mind when I looked at the last panel, but I think Rainbow can handle.
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:iconsupernova297:
Supernova297 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
I just looked at that, so it was the first thing that, unfortunately, popped into my mind.
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:iconxkawaiiworldx:
XKawaiiWorldX Featured By Owner May 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you ruined my childhood
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:iconsupernova297:
Supernova297 Featured By Owner May 8, 2016
Sorry. :(
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:iconpinkiethepowerpuff:
PinkieThePowerpuff Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  Student Artist
Aawww... SO cute. I can see this happening. :)
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:iconbengray1997:
BenGray1997 Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww, they're downright cute. :)
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:iconoctavia108:
octavia108 Featured By Owner May 9, 2015
SO CUTEFluffle Puff: *Pet pet* Pinkie Pie Free icon Lion running icon F2U Bonnie icon 
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:iconcherryrainbow49:
CherryRainbow49 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dawwwww
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IAmDibAndMothman Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Student General Artist
awwww
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:iconnovemberlilly:
NovemberLilly Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015
I think... I'm going to cry!Waaaah! but in a good way^_^
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:iconjigokutsuriana:
JigokuTsuriana Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaand, I'm tearing up. That's friggin' adorable.

I don't know why, but Rainbow Dash saying "Oh my...!" in any context really makes me laugh.
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snowflake20006 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cute!
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:iconresidentsmile:
residentsmile Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015
I believe I can fly..I believe I can touch the sky.
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chimkoe Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconemsquad:
Emsquad Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
Please make your comics bigger?, I cant read them
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:iconponys321:
ponys321 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Danisnotonfire: FEELS 
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whodatninja9386020 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
Get a plane.its conveinent.
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:iconmarcysparks:
MarcySparks Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
She wasnt my sister shes evil
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:iconmarcysparks:
MarcySparks Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Im feeling like,Im feeling like she will be princess cadence!
and scootaloo will be twily the filly!
your making this story to get a new generation! Scootaloo is teling the story about RD and her


OH IM SO EXCITED!!! NEXT I DONT KNOW WEEEEEDDDDDJHGGMJJHJISJDHSYHJING!
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Binxybeanygirl Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Awww....this makes me happy. 😊😂
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cupcakes82504 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015
Awwww!! OMG ONOZ Emoticon 
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DarkBloodsFlame Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
all this cute scenes from mlp will be my death one day
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:iconkone5497:
Kone5497 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this makes me wanna cry :)
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:iconrasinycon:
Rasinycon Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
Love forever with Rainbow Dash :)
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DiscordLexia Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
Dáww!
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:iconcandywatterson:
CandyWatterson Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwwwwwwwwww
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:iconlillygeneva:
LillyGeneva Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Daww.... STAHP MAKIN MEH WANNA CRY!happy cry XD 
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:iconhumming-way:
Humming-way Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
do you mind if I translate your comics in korean? :)
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:iconsora200:
Sora200 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Stop tugging at my heart! You'll tear it out! Oh God, the feels!!! :'(
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:iconwanjem:
Wanjem Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
This is so cute!
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GarfieldDrawedonly Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Me:OMG ONOZ Emoticon 
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:iconemilyceecee:
emilyceecee Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is SOOO cute,and at first in S1&2 I thought she was a big jerk
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L-MASTER Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
great! :D
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