It was great! Your proportions are all spot on! the story line is cute and the details appreciated. everything seems in order except for one its bitsy thing. i've notice in more than one of your comics; Rarity is sorta a greyish colour as opposed to her proper white coat. if you were to go and fix that deny-tiny detail it would be the cherry on top of a very delicious cake. (or maybe a sunday. boy, i sure do love ice cream. i wish i had some right now where's some ice cream when you need it, huh? *sigh*)
I would like to start with..... This is amazing I like how you put all the details into it and how the show would go xD I know ponies would think to themselves and then say something c: I love how rarity's mane is just perfect ^_^ It's an incredible piece of comic xD I would give it a 10/10 ^3^ all the detail of the background just stands out also~! Its just amazing! XDD that's what im tryin to say~! C: I dont know what else to say danngggggg DDD:!!! um... the cutie marks are spot on too~! have a nice day ^u^
Everybody's had that friend at one point in their life. You know, the one whom you offer a share of whatever you're eating/drinking in good faith that they'll just take a little. Then, however, that friend takes "you can have some" as an invite to take it all and proceeds to inhale the entirety of whatever it is you offered, leaving you little or none at all.
In Rarity's situation, Rose Luck is that friend. Poor Rarity.
chocolate is very deadly and poininous for most animals, but love all of your art! keep at it! but why was RARITY eating chocolate? isnt she the kind of mare who would be on a constant diet?
So I was at Bon Bon's shop, yeah? Buying huge amounts of chocolate. I leave, bump into Pinkie, and she thinks the stuff is for her. She take some. I'm nearly half-way home. I see Rarity. She sees me. She thinks the stuff is for her. She takes some. I move on. I'm at my front door. I hear a noise. I turn around. There's Celestia for some unkown reason, thinking I'm smuggling cake home in all that chocolate. She takes what's left, and flies off. I sit down on my couch. Moral of the Story: I hate it when the ladies think my chocolate is for them.
the story line is cute and the details appreciated. everything seems in order except for one its bitsy thing. i've notice in more than one of your comics; Rarity is sorta a greyish colour as opposed to her proper white coat. if you were to go and fix that deny-tiny detail it would be the cherry on top of a very delicious cake. (or maybe a sunday. boy, i sure do love ice cream. i wish i had some right now
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