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a rainy day. by Coltsteelstallion a rainy day. by Coltsteelstallion
created with the inkpad app for iPad.
Mlp:fim (c) Lauren Faust an Hasbro
art by me.

dont got anything interesting to tell about this one. just filly applejack (with a way to big hat) beeing sweet and stuff. also, first time filly rarity, i havent seen much of her on D.A.

:iconcoltsteelstallion:<have a nice day, and take care!
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Awesome, flawless, cute, touching, beautiful, excellent story,
i love how you drew this one, in my opinion filly applejack looks way cuter than rarity, btu hey its just my opinion ...

AJ eyes through the whole thing are so pretty !! her look in the third pannel just breaks my heart .. but aj knows how to be a great friend, and she doesn't care if she gets a little wet, ... you managed to plasm applejack's personality so good .

Your drawings are flawless as i said before , aj is so pretty on this one, ..

10/10 .

keep doing this comics i just love them !
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68 out of 80 deviants thought this was fair.

I had to take a few minutes to calm down from all the cuteness so I could give an accurate critique. My two favorites right here.

I was originally going to nitpick and ask why Applejack had freckles in the middle of her face, BUT as I recall, this was the case when we saw her cutie mark story so that negative notched up to a super positive. FANTASTIC eye for detail on that part, super bonus points forever.

My only other two nitpicks, is Applejack's hat looks like two different styles of Cowboy hat from the first and second frames to the last three. The first two frames depict it as a "Open Shaped" cowboy hate and the last three are closer to her more "Telescope/Diamond Shape".

Finally, the last frame, I'm a sucker for cute endings, and I feel like you only went 95% of the way here. I loved the little details in the second frame where Applejack is holding her hat while noticing Rarity's concern. The contemplation she shows in the next two frames and how shamelessly she holds it over Rarity's head. I think Rarity smiling, at the last frame would've really gave it that extra feel.
Keep her shocked frame, then add another where she smiles, and Applejack gives her classic warm smile while the hat is in her teeth.

So those are my two nitpicks and as you can see, those are things you really have to LOOK for. Ok, time for good things!

Background is good, you did a great job of depicting filly Applejack and Filly Rarity. I like how Rarity's tail seems to be starting a curl, as if it grows on her as she gets older, that's a fabulous touch. Expressions are great, nothing really looked off or felt forced. And again, AMAZING eye for detail with fill Applejack's middle face freckles. We see the side ones so often that even I forgot she had them in the middle of her face during her youth.

Aside from the nitpicks, like I said I loved this strip. Especially, because you told a story without dialogue, (even though in the description you mention having nothing interesting to tell) that's always awesome. I just really wanted that stronger ending. I always like to end on a good note! But hey, I've been watching you for a reason, I like what you do! I hope you found my critique worthy and useful!

Do I need to say it? Ok, I will...but you already know it's coming! Cliche fan comment in 3...2...1...

I love your work, keep it up!
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RandomPerson1310 Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Somewhere, beyond where most people wouldn't think to look, someone fainted from too much exposure to cuteness. 
sophie123456789a Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Photographer
awwwhhh last panel is so cuteTeamwork Tight Hug Grr. 
FefeFrenchfri Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Writer
Element of Genorosity <slash> Honesty!
ValenMosquera Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Thats why AJ is best pony! <3
Luletu021 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*heart melting*
Orangecraz Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
With that avatar, it should be *heart melting intensified*
Luletu021 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Whose the generous one?
IsabelleDeabra174 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Professional General Artist
Apple jack: I am
UnknownAlicorn Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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