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a rainy day. by Coltsteelstallion a rainy day. by Coltsteelstallion
created with the inkpad app for iPad.
Mlp:fim (c) Lauren Faust an Hasbro
art by me.

dont got anything interesting to tell about this one. just filly applejack (with a way to big hat) beeing sweet and stuff. also, first time filly rarity, i havent seen much of her on D.A.

:iconcoltsteelstallion:<have a nice day, and take care!
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:iconkanske-2099:
Awesome, flawless, cute, touching, beautiful, excellent story,
i love how you drew this one, in my opinion filly applejack looks way cuter than rarity, btu hey its just my opinion ...

AJ eyes through the whole thing are so pretty !! her look in the third pannel just breaks my heart .. but aj knows how to be a great friend, and she doesn't care if she gets a little wet, ... you managed to plasm applejack's personality so good .

Your drawings are flawless as i said before , aj is so pretty on this one, ..

10/10 .

keep doing this comics i just love them !
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I had to take a few minutes to calm down from all the cuteness so I could give an accurate critique. My two favorites right here.

I was originally going to nitpick and ask why Applejack had freckles in the middle of her face, BUT as I recall, this was the case when we saw her cutie mark story so that negative notched up to a super positive. FANTASTIC eye for detail on that part, super bonus points forever.

My only other two nitpicks, is Applejack's hat looks like two different styles of Cowboy hat from the first and second frames to the last three. The first two frames depict it as a "Open Shaped" cowboy hate and the last three are closer to her more "Telescope/Diamond Shape".

Finally, the last frame, I'm a sucker for cute endings, and I feel like you only went 95% of the way here. I loved the little details in the second frame where Applejack is holding her hat while noticing Rarity's concern. The contemplation she shows in the next two frames and how shamelessly she holds it over Rarity's head. I think Rarity smiling, at the last frame would've really gave it that extra feel.
OR
Keep her shocked frame, then add another where she smiles, and Applejack gives her classic warm smile while the hat is in her teeth.

So those are my two nitpicks and as you can see, those are things you really have to LOOK for. Ok, time for good things!

Background is good, you did a great job of depicting filly Applejack and Filly Rarity. I like how Rarity's tail seems to be starting a curl, as if it grows on her as she gets older, that's a fabulous touch. Expressions are great, nothing really looked off or felt forced. And again, AMAZING eye for detail with fill Applejack's middle face freckles. We see the side ones so often that even I forgot she had them in the middle of her face during her youth.

Aside from the nitpicks, like I said I loved this strip. Especially, because you told a story without dialogue, (even though in the description you mention having nothing interesting to tell) that's always awesome. I just really wanted that stronger ending. I always like to end on a good note! But hey, I've been watching you for a reason, I like what you do! I hope you found my critique worthy and useful!

Do I need to say it? Ok, I will...but you already know it's coming! Cliche fan comment in 3...2...1...

I love your work, keep it up!
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reigol21 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015  New Deviant
I like trains...
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PegasusFantasy2000 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Cute!  Applejack is so sweet.  ^^
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SonicTAlicorn Featured By Owner May 3, 2015
I remember seeing this a loooong time ago.
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sebastain2424 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
thats so cute ^^
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Re-mix-it-studios Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015  Student Artist
so adorable
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:iconmissmoonrise:
Missmoonrise Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015
cute
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:iconfellitorockero:
FellitoRockero Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015
Nice.
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:iconrainbowgamermc:
RainbowGamerMC Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Student Digital Artist
That's how friendship works....
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:iconbl00d111:
BL00D111 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015
dawww
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cupcakes82504 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015
you make such sweet comics!!!:happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: 
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:icon9king:
9king Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
haha, how silly
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RandomPerson1310 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
Somewhere, beyond where most people wouldn't think to look, someone fainted from too much exposure to cuteness. 
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sophie123456789a Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Photographer
awwwhhh last panel is so cuteTeamwork Tight Hug Grr. 
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FefeFrenchfri Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Writer
Element of Genorosity <slash> Honesty!
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:iconvalenmosquera:
ValenMosquera Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Thats why AJ is best pony! <3
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:iconluletu021:
Luletu021 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*heart melting*
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:iconorangecraz:
Orangecraz Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
With that avatar, it should be *heart melting intensified*
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:iconluletu021:
Luletu021 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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:iconalexwarlorn:
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Whose the generous one?
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:iconisabelledeabra174:
IsabelleDeabra174 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Professional General Artist
Apple jack: I am
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:iconunknownalicorn:
UnknownAlicorn Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
DAWWWW
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YugiohPonyAvengers Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Writer
How cute!!!
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:iconsnowharmony:
SnowHarmony Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I now ship them XD
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IsabelleDeabra174 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Professional General Artist
Dont you dare start with rarapple
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:iconsnowharmony:
SnowHarmony Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I was kidding.
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IsabelleDeabra174 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Professional General Artist
Good
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Mylittlepony551 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
To begin I would like to say that this story could not be true because Applejack and Rarity did not know before having their Cutie Marks.
But the graphics are fine. Rarity's face is not that a lot like her.
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TP-Night Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's just ment to be cute, not accurate to the original story :)
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Mylittlepony551 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You are not who did this, are you?
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TP-Night Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, But I'm assuming that, since it's not accurate to official timeline, and it IS cute.
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Mylittlepony551 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ok... Ok... dam
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AppleDash4eves Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
This is why AJ is best pony.
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:iconzero-the-heroine:
Zero-The-Heroine Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AW! Maybe they switched elements! Also, considering the last few comics where Rarity has been a bit mean to AJ with Big Mac, this is especially sweet.
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LtGIR Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Best Rarijack comic. Period. Love seeing things like this with my two favorite ponies. This is right up there with how I felt when the writers tossed the Rarijack line in at the end of Crystal Empire Part 2. XD
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pskullv Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
My friend you receive my very first HHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNGGG!
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Coltsteelstallion Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
XD okay, thnx
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freelancerraiko Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
AJ is more generous than Rarity! O.-
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So cute!!! Just look at filly AJ in the last panel!!! :love: :love: :love:
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Ollie-C Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww! So sweet!
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AmethystFoxx Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D :D :D :D !!! Awesome you.. and Applejack is soo nice!!! ^_^ fife stars! :star: :star: :star: star: :star:
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Coltsteelstallion Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Thanks
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:iconamethystfoxx:
AmethystFoxx Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Opps forgot the last star.. ^_^ :star: there cha go!
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:iconhappipet:
happipet Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If you read it backwards,it's kinda funny.
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ChaudStarpower Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so much adorableness I love this!! you are the best!! I wish I could make pony comics like you!
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AshurasDaughter Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
That's why I love Applejack! She's not only honest, but is practically all of the elements (minus magic) in one!
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daniel10alien Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Now who's the element of generosity? :O
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riotfaerie Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Adorable!! <3 I love for the fact that they're friends since little.
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nikkichic109 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awwwwwwww Applejack is so sweet :heart:
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Frost-life Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Awwwwww that's so kind of you Applejack!!!
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TakemyPILLS Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Absolutely adorable!! Keep up the great work!
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