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No muffins? by Coltsteelstallion No muffins? by Coltsteelstallion
Created with the inkpad app for iPad.
mlp:fim (c) Lauren Faust and Hasbro
Art by me.

Haven't got any Derpy lately, so here s a Derpy comic.
It's actually a follow up of a comic I made way earlier ago [link]

:iconcoltsteelstallion:<have a nice day!
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:icondj-bleach:
Lemme start off by saying that I adore your art style. It's vibrant and colorful, and very much in the style in the show, while still being original enough to call your own.

Derpy's arm looks a bit odd in the last panel, however, though that's probably just nitpicking on my part, and I'll chalk it up to the cartoonish style.

Now, while the art of this comic is wonderful, the joke...well, to be blunt, it's stale.

It's not that it's bad, it's just boring. The punchline is literally, "Derpy loves muffins", which has been absolutely done to death a million times over within this fandom. Vinyl's reaction doesn't really seem to fitting either. She looks like she's utterly heartbroken, which I find is a bit of an over reaction to a friend disliking a restaurant.

In short; good art, poor joke.
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:iconkonatalives4animeb3:
First of all i have to say this. The first, second and last panel could be neater, and i don't really like Vinyls reaction to Derpy leaving. This is very good, and i love it, but i guess it could be neater. Otherwise, i love it! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
I don't know why you've added Vinyl into the comic, because she isn't really a friend of Derpy's. I think this was done very well, but maybe you could have gone a little slower to make it look better? Great art though, and keep up the good work. :D

Viola, out.
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Agufanatic98 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahahaha, oh Derpy. :XD:
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InSaNeGamerLuna68 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lolololz XD
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NabilaGhaisani15 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
poor vinyl :(
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PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
It would of been funny when Derpy learns that there is no muffins (3rd part) that her eyes became normal.
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MLPLOVER2020 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Interface Designer
FUCKING DERPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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GentalmanBoxer Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Ditzy Doo Wait! That restaurant makes special orders. They can make you Muffins.
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PnFForever11 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
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Boy, that escalated quickly
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antivenom907 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
figures
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PyramidHead90 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Your species is vegetarian.  You wouldn't know a good restaurant if it bit your face off.
...somehow...
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DemonPanther Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
Aw, and she looked so happy!
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