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No muffins? by Coltsteelstallion No muffins? by Coltsteelstallion
Created with the inkpad app for iPad.
mlp:fim (c) Lauren Faust and Hasbro
Art by me.

Haven't got any Derpy lately, so here s a Derpy comic.
It's actually a follow up of a comic I made way earlier ago [link]

:iconcoltsteelstallion:<have a nice day!
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:icondj-bleach:
Lemme start off by saying that I adore your art style. It's vibrant and colorful, and very much in the style in the show, while still being original enough to call your own.

Derpy's arm looks a bit odd in the last panel, however, though that's probably just nitpicking on my part, and I'll chalk it up to the cartoonish style.

Now, while the art of this comic is wonderful, the joke...well, to be blunt, it's stale.

It's not that it's bad, it's just boring. The punchline is literally, "Derpy loves muffins", which has been absolutely done to death a million times over within this fandom. Vinyl's reaction doesn't really seem to fitting either. She looks like she's utterly heartbroken, which I find is a bit of an over reaction to a friend disliking a restaurant.

In short; good art, poor joke.
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:iconkonatalives4animeb3:
First of all i have to say this. The first, second and last panel could be neater, and i don't really like Vinyls reaction to Derpy leaving. This is very good, and i love it, but i guess it could be neater. Otherwise, i love it! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
I don't know why you've added Vinyl into the comic, because she isn't really a friend of Derpy's. I think this was done very well, but maybe you could have gone a little slower to make it look better? Great art though, and keep up the good work. :D

Viola, out.
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NabilaGhaisani15 Apr 6, 2014  New member Student Digital Artist
poor vinyl :(
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:iconprototype223:
It would of been funny when Derpy learns that there is no muffins (3rd part) that her eyes became normal.
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:iconmlplover2020:
MLPLOVER2020 Feb 13, 2014  New member Student Interface Designer
FUCKING DERPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icongentalmanboxer:
Ditzy Doo Wait! That restaurant makes special orders. They can make you Muffins.
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:iconpnfforever11:
:iconescalatedquicklyplz:
Boy, that escalated quickly
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:iconantivenom907:
antivenom907 Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
figures
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:iconpyramidhead90:
Your species is vegetarian.  You wouldn't know a good restaurant if it bit your face off.
...somehow...
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:icondemonpanther:
Aw, and she looked so happy!
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:icontheshipingqueen:
TheShipingQueen Nov 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i know right
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:iconzalgoprincesscadance:
ZalgoPrincessCadance Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Because they have the muffins on the DESSERT menu, Ditzy.
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